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Tassle Riverswift

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Who Am I?
« on: June 11, 2008, 05:58:49 PM »
Jean Valjean, obviously. Er, or maybe not.

Well welll well, I've been voted off. (And hey, if you don't mind, anyone want to speak up with why you voted? Just curious. What-can-I-do better, all that. Of course, 'The Other Three Were Just Awesome' works, too. XD.)

Anyway! Guess away! I'll go ahead and warn you that I do not have another name on this site, or the other- never got around to creating an account. I was on Terrouge, however, and am active on the VI. ^^

Brooga Delfan

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 06:50:44 PM »
Who am I... 24601!

*grin*

Bo hurr. Oi knows who 'ee iz, Mizz Tassle.
Bo hurr.

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 10:44:31 PM »
Have you been in one of these things before?

I for one did not vote for you. You were actually my number two. *grumbles about EVERYTHING*
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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2008, 11:43:13 AM »
Well welll well, I've been voted off. (And hey, if you don't mind, anyone want to speak up with why you voted? Just curious. What-can-I-do better, all that. Of course, 'The Other Three Were Just Awesome' works, too. XD.)

One half of it was that I just liked the other three better. Cricket had been in my three since the begining; Ulrick had always been hovering around my top three, and once Ashira died, he moved up immedietly; and Brooga had impressed me with her character development and ability to portray the emotion of the molemaid.

The other half is, although I enjoyed Tassle and her development, I felt your writing itself was lacking in some regards. There often wasn't enough description of emotion/atmosphere to really get me to feel anything, and your dialogue often seemed a little too forced, not flowing natural.
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Tassle Riverswift

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2008, 08:12:42 PM »
*gnaws on Broog*

XD.

And I have, in fact, been in another contest! And for the sake of helping you out, I shall reveal it. *nod* The Emperor's Decree.

Thanks for your comments, Stonewall! Much appreciated.

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2008, 04:11:00 AM »
How active have you been on the ROC as of late?
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Tassle Riverswift

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #6 on: June 15, 2008, 02:40:49 PM »
Well, I haven't been on Terrouge in absolute ages. I'm pretty active on the VI (or was until I started working a few weeks ago. Curse you, job!) And I joined Black Arch Fort, posted a few times and such, but never really got started.

So I wouldn't say I'm extremely active, but I /am/ here! Somewhat!

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Re: Who Am I?
« Reply #7 on: June 15, 2008, 09:18:28 PM »
Who were you on Black Arch Fort?
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