Frosted Flakes (or, Reviews by Frost)

[Frost]

Afternoon, everyone!

This will be the first contest that I attempt (and hopefully succeed) to review. I'll be adding my thoughts and encouragement to all the writers, and will also offer any help/assistance (for whatever it's worth) via PM, as well. I'll be adding to this thread as the story grows, but please feel free to add your own comments/questions here, also. Civility and humor will follow, I assure you. ;)

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Update: If any of the writers would like a platform to answer other questions/explain parts of the story, I'd be glad to provide them that opportunity. I also hope to pose some questions to them, if they'd be interested (post-contest, naturally).