The Castle of Stonewall's Reviews

Started by Stonewall, September 27, 2009, 01:08:06 PM

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Damask the Minstrel

Thanks for the reviews!

I'd defend most of Dammy's shifts, myself, but obviously I'm biased. ^.^ I'd just ask that you bear in mind the context when he does each shift. For instance, he'll be blustering and loud to a rival, but horrendously shy to his love. And, well, you might not like the voice, but keep a close eye on it. I'm trying to be subtle and literary with him, not just randomly crazy.

Again, though, thanks!
"The story of life - Boy meets girl. Boy gets stupid. Boy and girl live stupidly ever after." -- Dr. James Wilson

Rath the Whirlwind

That is definitely a legitimate point/worry, and I'm sorry that I have to say anything at all, but I must say that it is quite hard to break a way of living, particularly if you've learned your entire life to rely on such a thing as fighting.  So, when he's in a stressful situation, he's going to go back to what he knows best. 

That being said, though, he will change... just, gradually.

Thanks for the review, by the way.
I am the white void.  I am the cold steel.  I am the just blade.  With axe in paw shall I reap the sins of this world and cleanse it in the fires of destruction.  I am the Whirlwind; the end has come!

Bellona Littlebrush

Thank you for reviewing, Stonewall, sir! I'm glad you're enjoying Bell's character growth. I will continue to do my level best.
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.


-- Alfred, Lord Tennyson

Eliza Lacrimosa

*bows* Thank you, Master Stonewall!

And, don't worry! You have by no means seen the end of the facial-scar-hindrances. :p
She walks in beauty, like the night
of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
meet in her aspect and her eyes...


~Lord Byron

Totally still working on the RV5 epilogue, I swear...

Venril

Thank you very much, Stonewall!  The reviews are highly appreciated by all of us.
What'cha gonna do, PL?
What'cha gonna do, PL?
When Murphy shows up and s--- goes to hell,
What'cha gonna do, PL?