Haiku Contest! ^^

Started by Opal, November 02, 2009, 04:44:14 AM

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Revel

You have to admit
Fluffiness is a virtue.
Arn't we all a bit?

*rubs Rath's soft ferret tummy*
And I hope that you know that nature is so
This same rain that draws you near me
Falls on rivers and land, and forests and sand,
Makes the beautiful world that you'll see in the morning


To all reviewers, past and present, thank you! I don't always find something to say in reply to each reviewer but I do my best to read them and will take their advice as best I can. You are appreciated!

Sycamore

That's a little weird.
Do you like palm trees to chop?
Then it's not so bad.
And then he DIED!!!

Damask the Minstrel

Flutt'ring, leaves untied --
Separated from their trees
Like we, falling fast.

(Sorry to take the fun from the lightheartedness. ^.-)
"The story of life - Boy meets girl. Boy gets stupid. Boy and girl live stupidly ever after." -- Dr. James Wilson

Sycamore

Damask is somber.
Maybe he should sleep around.
What a spoony bard.
And then he DIED!!!

Deadtail

But with whom? If I
Were a female bird, I'd fly
Out of the desert.
No s? si la guerra ha terminado
O se han olvidado de m?...
Como un topo, sin nadie alrededor
Bajo el suelo, como un topo, sin ver la luz del sol

Fern Greenwood

Old friends in disguise
Weave a tale of epic size
Who will unmask next?

Jarrtail

Allies strange, foes worse,
Blind or totally insane.
Take your pick, questor.

Cricket Argyll

Fern, have I mentioned you always wrote my favorite poems during the Wordsmith challenges. ;)

The sounding of drums
Calls warriors to the fight
And even clerks, too.
*crickets chirruping*

Revel

#53
like a giant crack
in the large plastic globe of
a gumball machine
And I hope that you know that nature is so
This same rain that draws you near me
Falls on rivers and land, and forests and sand,
Makes the beautiful world that you'll see in the morning


To all reviewers, past and present, thank you! I don't always find something to say in reply to each reviewer but I do my best to read them and will take their advice as best I can. You are appreciated!

Sparrowhawk

#54
Revel's new post is
going to give me nightmares.
(it's that frightening)

:(

Cairn Destop

Tomorrow stalks them
As seven face their future.
Decide audience.
In life, the only thing that ever adds up is a column of numbers.

Deadtail

Many blind rodents.
See how they run. Or don't see,
As the case may be.
No s? si la guerra ha terminado
O se han olvidado de m?...
Como un topo, sin nadie alrededor
Bajo el suelo, como un topo, sin ver la luz del sol

Damask the Minstrel

My reality
Twisted about like these caves
Who am I, inside?
"The story of life - Boy meets girl. Boy gets stupid. Boy and girl live stupidly ever after." -- Dr. James Wilson

Jarrtail

Voice, whispering lies.
So trustworthy, it cannot
lead to anything good.

Damask the Minstrel

But which is really me?
The voice, who sounds like a spy,
Or this noble heart?
"The story of life - Boy meets girl. Boy gets stupid. Boy and girl live stupidly ever after." -- Dr. James Wilson