Whimsical Musings

Started by Kingsdotr, August 26, 2015, 10:06:15 AM

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Kingsdotr

The Path To?

Crue! Times two! Off we goo!

Squirrels sweat? Whoa! As my teacher used to say: Working hard, or hardly working?

An honorable crew. An honorable Crue! Tee hee hee.

No guards? Hmm, I suspect A TRAP!

"I still miss that bag." I'm glad I'm not the only one who converses half aloud with myself.

Rusted? Is is made of metal? I know it's a black ship, but, ya know, I always thought it was painted.

Dekeft rolled a 3 on sneak, didn't he?

So it IS wood. Hmmmmmm.

Ah, yes, the classic shushing of the inanimate object. Nice, Crue. If there was anyone about, I'm sure they'd have come running by now.

Yeah, Dekeft. Lazy gott. Heh.

Wait, Blade didn't come up with this on his own? Where'd he get it from, then?

"Oh, you're THAT captain. Right." Methinks Ciera won't be too happy with that.

Aha. That's why there's no guards.

Daw, Tooley! I doubt she needed the help, though.

And he's in trouble. Poor Tooley!

There goes the plan! Darn! Now what? I hope the slaves in the mountain don't move TOO EARLY!!!!!

GAH! Sugar! Where did he come from? And how on earth did he know?

Cliiiiiifff Hanger! Hanging from a Cliff! And that's why he's called Cliff Hanger! Crue! Well done on DROPPING US WITH NO WARNING!  I...I don't know what to do! I just... I must know what happens next! Gah, you guys have spoiled me!

Loved this post. We get to see a little more modern technology through the eyes of our intrepid healer, we see Tooley again, and Crue gets captured. Again. There a couple of odd word choices, but otherwise, a great post! I must find out more!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

Fires Burn at Midnight

Tooley! Post numero uno plus one! I love it when we get more than one from a character. You think they're done, and suddenly, it's like finding one last cookie at the bottom of a jar you thought was empty. Yay! Mmmm, cookie.

Oh, right. He was following Ciera. I guess there were beasts around to hear that commotion Crue made with the lantern. Bad lantern!

Daw, Tooley! So desperate to keep her from hurting his friends! If a bit misguided...

Man, Ciera's so cold! He still has some use? Why did she ever have his respect?

You know, for someone who despises regular pirates, she isn't much different. Loyalty is just something that gets lost in the darker elements. I wonder where Tooley got it.

Ciera wanted to change the world. But what seemed so glamorous will actually change things in a way she never expected. And it seems she doesn't like the changes that will come.

And then there's Tooley. He knows something has to be done! Not for himself, but for others. That's the greatest difference between Tooley and Ciera. Their motivations.

And now he's caught. Great. The action never lets up! This is so exciting!

What's the big deal with taking him all the way up there? Is he just lazy?

"He didn't understand what any of that meant, but it sounded bad." Oh, Tooley.

Ooh! Fight scene! Go, Tooley, Go!

Somebody recognized him. GASP! He's been recognized!

We're off to kill the Pirate, the Horrible Piraty King. The things he did, believe me, kid, you never heard such a thing! Yoof, Tooley's got his work cut out for him!

Yay! Tooley and his crimefighting stuff! Things are really moving fast this round! Must have more posts!!!!!!!!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

A Pirate's Life is Not For Me

Ciera? Ciera,what are you doing? Why were you sneaking around the shipyard?

Aha, so that?s where she got the name for the cannons. It hadn?t been mentioned before. Sense has been made!

Snort, of course not! Blade?s the only one who can have power. I wonder if he plans to share it with anybody. Including Ciera. If I were her, I?d be watching very closely after this little reveal.

?Hey, that?s right! We?re supposed to be doing Piraty things!? Accent included.

So...they?re not pirates anymore? What does that make them now?

Piracy for Piracy?s sake! That should be his motto. He?s all, ?Let?s save the pirates!? then kills their, um, ideals. Whichever ones they might have. If they have any.

I thought it was bad luck to rename a ship. Or was a ship that was sunk and raised again? I can?t remember.

So...she just...leaves. And that?s it. Huh. That?s...disappointing. I?m going to have to speak to Bob about this.

Weak sauce! She just leaves? That?s not like Ciera! What does she plan to do now, hide from Blade for the rest of her life? He thinks she?s on his side, and when he finds out, he?ll feel like she betrayed him. Again. He won?t just let that go. Is she going to assemble her own pirate crew, and say, ?Boo, you?re not a pirate! Look at me, I?m a real pirate!? and stick out her tongue? Not happy, Bob. Not Happy.
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Airan

Bob here, sharing some brief context :)

QuotePiracy for Piracy?s sake! That should be his motto. He?s all, ?Let?s save the pirates!? then kills their, um, ideals. Whichever ones they might have. If they have any.

His ideals technically. As he once wanted to make an empire where pirates could be united and free, but has now changed the way they work to simply give himself more power.

QuoteWeak sauce! She just leaves? That?s not like Ciera! What does she plan to do now...

QuoteCiera looked up towards The Zephyr. Right past it, a group of small vessels - small enough that an experienced beast could likely sail them alone- were tied to the docks, rocking gently in the waves. She sighed.

"Something necessary."
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Vera Silvertooth

Quote from: Kingsdotr on September 23, 2015, 05:10:52 PM

?Hey, that?s right! We?re supposed to be doing Piraty things!? Accent included.

I?m going to have to speak to Bob about this.


Loving the Veggietale quotes there... :-P

Matra Hammer

I agree with our OP on the Ciera front. The justification for her leaving is there, but, gah, tis a sad way to see anybeast go. Especially a character as influential and well done as Ciera. Seemed a bit rushed. An appropriate but fast way out.

I'm guessing there was some IRL gremlins pulling at Ciera's coat? Seems that way from the guest posting.

Airan

QuoteI agree with our OP on the Ciera front. The justification for her leaving is there, but, gah, tis a sad way to see anybeast go. Especially a character as influential and well done as Ciera. Seemed a bit rushed. An appropriate but fast way out.

I'm guessing there was some IRL gremlins pulling at Ciera's coat? Seems that way from the guest posting.

Yes, Ciera got pretty sick and was unable to write her post so I was forced to sub it. When I asked her what she would do, she told me that Ciera would likely just leave Blade behind.
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Kingsdotr

A Bit Hippocratic, Don't You Think?

Airan, thank you for pointing out those things to me. Sorry if I offended you. These observations are in no way professional, they are simply for my own amusement. Also, I didn't know the whole situation with Ciera. I hope things go better for her...

With that said! Plink! Up first again! Women and children first, perhaps?

Um. Why is she going to tell Blade? Does she not know what he is yet? Gah, she's too young! Too focused on what she's gaining to look at the cost! Don't tell him!  NO!

Oh, hey, betrayal. Nice segue. Now, the question is: WHO DO WE TRUST!!!!!!!! Madam Burn-your-House-Down is not a good choice, methinks. Oh, Plink, you are in for a world of hurt.

Ok, in my mind, when Julia opens the door? I totally saw a cloud of perfume billow through the doorway and swallowing Plink. Made her choke. Made me choke, too. I've run into too many clouds of perfume.

Ooh, moon-limned! I like!

OOOOOOOOH Trap door!  Or portcullis, or something like! YES! Don't let those dirty, rotten thieves steal from the other dirty, rotten thieves! It's just not fair! Oh, wait, they're pirates. I forgot. Anyone else confused as to which group to cheer on?

Ok, it's a chain. Close enough.

Why is Julia being so nice to Plink? I'm suspicious.

Wait. "It's not your fault you're a coward. If you were a wildcat..." I think she was just insulted. Cat fight, anyone?

Oh, nice. Plink's cannon fodder. Perfect.

Angry cat is ANGRY! Aaaaaaaaaand they forgot about the claws. Tsk, tsk. Never forget natural weapons.

This is the part of the movie where I would be screaming at the screen, "You idiots! Mob her! If you work together, you could bring her down! NO, not one at a time! Bah, forget it."

Oh, hey, diamond. I knew that would get her in trouble. Also, perfect opportunity for blackmail. Maybe I should be worried that I think like Julia. Hmmmmmmmmmmm...

"I wasn't going to keep it! I just want to help!" Whoops, wrong story...

Dumb, dumb, dumb! Plink, don't do it! That's just what happened to Scully! I really hate Blade.

Awwww, poor Tooley. At least he's got stuff figured out! Plink's just mean.

Oh, boy. Oh, boy. Oh, boy! What's this story coming to? Who to trust, who to be loyal to? Yikes!

Plink, I love this post! The whole struggle Plink is in to cling tight to her dream, and yet to have the burden of that dream grow heavier as she learns more, it's fantastic! Well done!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

We'd Just Like to Ask You a Few Questions

Vera! Cooking up something adventurous, I hope. How's that escape plan going, I wonder?

Today's the daaaayyy! The sun is shining, the tank is clean, and we are getting out of...GASP! THE TANK IS CLEAN! *cough* Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Ok, where's the Pirate Grapevine when you need it? I would have thought that the news that a captain defected (Ciera, How Could You!), another captain TRIED to defect (Greyjaw's not going anywhere, really), and Tooley was trying to steal treasure, or something, would have swept through the troops like the mange. Seriously, where are the gossips? Lying down on the job, man! Is Blade trying to keep it all hush, hush? OOh, that doesn't bode well for the weasel. Or maybe the kitchen is a little too out of the way for inveterate gossips.

Wait, mushroom and leek scones? I thought scones were sweet. I knew about the pasties... 'Course, I'm not from England, so what do I know?

Oh, right, the fox perfume. Great. Yet another complication. PLINK, HAVEN'T YOU CAUSED ENOUGH TROUBLE?! Now, we have to go through this!

Come on, someone's got to be able to outfox Blade, here. Yuk yuk.

Name dropping! Guaranteed to get you your release! Unless, of course, the name you drop belongs to someone who's in the holding cell already. Things are going downhill fast!

No, she doesn't drink. Hmmm, a little nervous, are we, Vera?

Oh, crap. He has the amulet. I forgot about that thing. Oooooooh, conflicting emotions! Dramatic paradigm shifts! Possible betrayals!

TORIN?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, hey, random recipe. Nice. Must keep that one tucked in the back of my head.

Right! I knew Blade wouldn't just let Ciera go. Grrrrrr, he's EXTREMELY annoying like that. EEp.

EWWWWWWWWWW the Lair of the Skinner. Or DeTailer. Ugh.

DON'T TELL ME HE WEARS THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND NOW HE KNOWS ABOUT THE SOUP!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh dear.

Erk. Fingernails. Gonna be a while before I can trim mine, thanks, Vera.

WOW.  My goodness. Just. Wow. Huh. Ick. That was...frightening. Can someone just please drop the mountain on Torin? That would be great.

Nice job, Vera. I couldn't stop reading once I started. Nice way to just LEAVE HER THERE too. What is it with you guys and the cliff hangers?
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

Breaking It

Tooley! Right after that parting shot from Plink (not cool, Plink.) Lessee how he deals!

So, depressed weasel: not really that surprising considering Plink's cutting comments.

YESSSSSS!!!!!! BECOME THE FIYAH GOTT!!!! That's perfect! Oooh, hoo, hoo! Sweet!

And he's half wearing the costume. Talk about awkward moments.

"No, Tooley, I am your father!" "Right. K. That's awesome." Dude!!!!!

"Oh, hey, we can catch up! Talk about ... uh ... what are you wearing?" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh, yeah. The guards. Tooley wasn't the only one who forgot. Hey, it's a father-son outing!

DAW, he just found him, and now he's lost him! That's just sad.

Whoops, the deity's a bit early. Better step up the performance, before the yokels notice!

Hah, take that, Shuga! Tooley's here to save the day!

Uh oh. Quick, strike a match!

Invisible Fire!!!!!! Hurrah! Nice, Tooley!

NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *whimper*

No, literally, I am crying at this moment. That's just too sad!!!!! A good way to go out, though. Goodbye, Tooley. Well written, very moving. That darn Shuga.

GAH, THAT'S NOT FAIR!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

See How Your Garden Grows

Whew. Okay. Finally got that last one out of my system. Mostly. Moving on! Chak! Let's see what's goin' on with our man on the inside. Hopefully it's stabbing Torin in the kidney.

Yowch. "Then again, if Nimbleton were around, Reedox would probably still have a tail." Harsh. Chak doesn't let up, even on himself!

How do you do it? First, it's Nimbleton, now it's the mole. I got quite attached just from a couple sentences, you know. How very Jacques of you.

I love how much Chak is growing as a character. Helping the struggling slaves, then helping with their work. It's touching how much he actually wants to help. Just hope Torin doesn't notice. Can he just trip over an axe now?

YES! YES! HIT HIM AGAIN! Ooh, manicuring instruments? Methinks you should go FIND VERA NOW!!!!!!!! Do the instruments have a helpful spot or two of blood to clue them in?

Buried in sulfur. Very poetic. I like.

REVOLT! I LOVE IT! First the Mongoose tribes, then the slaves. It's every tyrant's nightmare!

Very nice, Chak! It was really nice to have some justice for the slaves, especially after the last post. Now all I need is some comic relief... Maybe I'll just have to watch some cats on youtube or something. Oh, and thanks for killing off Torin. Couldn't have happened to a better guy. And I love where Chak is going now, can't wait to see how much he grows!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Rascal

This is my reaction to reading this weeks postings.

"Ah its so late at night...but Im so wired and up right now...I know! I will finally read up on the contest. I know! I will choose this post at random, seems like a good place to start and HOLY CARP BATMAN DID THAT JUST HAPPEN!? But that was...that was...but...well dang o.o"

Action, humor DEATH.

I need to find the time to read more of these...there are some good writers in here...

Kingsdotr

Tell me about it! I was just thinking to myself today, this series is so much better than a lot of what is out there, and it's not even really a book.

Also, it occurred to me that Torin's death in Chak's post is somewhat reminiscent of Malkariss' in Mattimeo. Hadn't caught that before. Oh, that brings back the good ole' days!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

Put My Foot Paw Down

Gah! I forgot where this post started! Double whammy, first from Tooley, and now from Crue. *whine* Right in the heart. Sometimes, just the reaction of another character to a death is heartbreaking.

DUDE!!!!!!!! ANGRY SQUIRREL!!!!!!! Never anger the healer. They know how to hurt you. "You killed someone I like! THAT IS NOT A GOOD PLACE TO STAND!!!!"

Yeah, you should be scared, you lily-livered, quivering mess of slime, oily snake-skin murderer. Back-stabber! I hope you get Flurgy Twinj!

Evil grin from Laika = win

Okay! To the rescue! Finally, things are coming together. Mongooses, unite! Plus, liberators. Yee haw! Now, let's hope the slaves and mongooses don't kill each other by mistake.

Oh, so they're more the assassin type. Sweet. This might be easier than I thought.

I totally forgot about the mushrooms! Sweet! Too bad Torin can't tell the pirates what's going on, heh heh heh.

GOSH DARN IT YOU GUYS, I WAS DONE CRYING!!!!!!!!! *sniff* Tooley.

A perfect send off for the woozle! I was so excited to see the mongooses in action, and I was not disappointed. Also, it's nice to see that Crue's companions have noticed her convictions, enough to stop her from throwing away everything she's believed in up til now. Very nice, Crue!
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.

Kingsdotr

Cannon to the Left of Them, Cannon to the Right

And here's Robert! This is your moment to shine, me boyo!

Time for a rousing speech from the leader of the band. Not bad for our average navigator.

Yay, flashback! Love those!

Recruiter? Hmmmmm.

"Dang it, Jim, I'm a navigator, not a fighter!" Needs must, I suppose. Seems to me he gave in a little too quickly, though.

Oh, yeah, the harbor! Since he's been loading his sparklies for a while now, the harbor makes sense.

Good post, Robert! Nice to see the hedgehog take the reins, finally. Also, Fred. Does Robert give a nickname to each of the creatures he meets? I just never saw our dilapidated hare as a "Fred."
I knew then. I knew I would never be like them. I would do everything in my power never to become them. I only feared that I would lose myself to that focus. Either way, I would no longer be me.